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    Hello guys.

    I need to write a personal narrative for School. You aren't allowed to help me, and it's already done, but I thought I would share it here. Opinions?
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    It's not complete yet, right..? You'd get a horrible mark if that was the completed narrative. I am looking forward to the (probable) continuation. It looks like it'd have good potential. I do see some things you can improve, but I won't say it until you ask, since you said you didn't want help.



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    Quote Originally Posted by blankaex View Post
    It's not complete yet, right..? You'd get a horrible mark if that was the completed narrative. I am looking forward to the (probable) continuation. It looks like it'd have good potential. I do see some things you can improve, but I won't say it until you ask, since you said you didn't want help.
    It's a draft yes. When I said "It's complete" I meant the draft. I could use help, I suppose. I said that I didn't want it, in case I'd get a bad grade for it, but I found out that it's alright.

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