[FANFIC] My story called, A Maple Story!

[SacredOne]

Ok, bad news folks. It might be awhile before I finiash the 4th episode. There are a few reasons with this. One reason is because I havnt worked all of the details out in my head yet. And I dont want a very important episode in the story to be a bunch of crud slapped together. Another reason is because I didnt play Maple Story once over the weekend because I wanted to get the 3rd episode out there for you guys.

So those are the two main reasons that it might be awhile. Plus, you guys can tell me what you think the 4th episode will be by the title. I wonder how close you can get.

I still want to be part of the story. :D

Either that, the characters are purely fictional. Or come from the top of your head. :P

But still, the story rox.

Actually that may be possible now. I told one of my friends(the only one that pretty much knows the whole story now) and she also wanted to be a part of it. So I may be able to work you in and other people in the same way I did her.

[Argh]

omg can i be in the story?
i can like, be one of the crewmembers that dies or somthing XD

put me in but please make me die :D

[SacredOne]

omg can i be in the story?
i can like, be one of the crewmembers that dies or somthing XD

put me in but please make me die :D

Ummm, ok. I dont know why you want to die but I'll see what I can do.

[snowster]

Wow, this story is probably the best story based on MapleStory that I have ever read. :shock:
Yeah, you should proofread and all that blah, blah, but keep on going cause this story is getting really exciting. =]
Good job!

[LoveMehKissMeh]

me be Priest.Please =)

[SacredOne]

o.O So many requests. It makes me feel kinda special :)

[starbonked]

I thought it was pretty good.

Problem is, your poll is too extreme. I chose the only positive option, but it's not really THAT good. The spelling errors annoy me, glad there aren't many or I wouldn't have finished the chapter I read.

[chaz_jo]

Wow this story may not be grammatically great but is the best Fan Fiction story i've read for a while. This has inspired me to read MapleStory fan fictions till the patch is complete.

I can't go out because it's bloody England and my friends live to far away from me

:( boo hoo

[SacredOne]

Yea ummm, sorry about all the grammer issues. Im really trying to stop produdeing so many. If you guys feel like showing me some like Phantom then I will be able to fix them.

[SacredOne]

Wonderful news ya all. Episode 4 is now completed. However its not Episode 4 - Betrayal, instead its called Episode 4 - A Power Within. The reason I had to make this changed was because the gap between the end of Episode 3 and the what was supposed to be the end of Episode 4 was just too big. So I split it up number 4 into two episodes. And I think its better that way. So any way, read and hopefully enjoy. Also, I really hope there arent any errors. I read through it to try and find all the errors.

SIDE NOTE: If you're wondering why it took me so long to finish #4. Since it says in my quote that I would start on Monday. Well...I didnt start till this morning -_-; Its cause I got the new Fire Emblem game for Gamecube. And I just couldnt put it down till now. Of course Im about to pick it right back in a few seconds..............I havnt played MS in a week -_-;