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    THAT ROCKED!!!!!!
    that was such a great story (I didn't read it completely yet but so far it's great)
    :D
    WietseIce lvl 5x i/l wizard

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    This is arguably the BEST Maple FanFic I have ever read. The quality is of professional standard and the storyline pulls you in.
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    @General Consensus: ...<3
    Thanks, everyone. It really means a lot to me. In return, I'll.. er, keep writing. >.> *wish I could offer more*

    @Pyrofyr: Not quite. We live in Tampa, anyway.
    OMG NO STALKS PLS.
    And no, I'm doing neither. I have a general outline set up, but it's very loose. I don't premeditate on conversations or minor fights or anything. But I know what direction I want this story to go, and I'm gonna guess it's gonna be around 18-30 chapters. >.>
    The number will become more apparent when I get into the Rising Action, I promise. D:

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    I'm alot further now and it ain't boring. The quality is superb or even better than that! :P
    WietseIce lvl 5x i/l wizard

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    OMG it's not done yet *sob sob* :cry:
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    Chapter nine is up. D:

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    I take it you write professionally? Great work, you have alot of talent.

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    Im printing all 30 pages. WIll read tonight
    I need some friends on Kradia.
    Add me please, make me feel special.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Strata
    I take it you write professionally? Great work, you have alot of talent.
    Uh.. I wish.

    (I'm fifteen. =/)

    It's thirty pages? Eesh.

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    I am NOT jealous of his work, in fact I think it a great literary exercise. I believe that you can write well, and most probably will... However, this story was frankly, quite bad. There was, I felt, too much description, and not much use of writing techniques to draw the reader in. (Not saying you didn't use any.) =/ No matter what, I still look forward to the next story and I hope it's a greater improvement on this one. :D
    In God I trust.... All others I virus scan.

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