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    Quote Originally Posted by segoy
    I am NOT jealous of his work, in fact I think it a great literary exercise. I believe that you can write well, and most probably will... However, this story was frankly, quite bad. There was, I felt, too much description, and not much use of writing techniques to draw the reader in.
    Though it disappointed me (emotear), I'm glad I finally met somebody that didn't like the work.

    I'm writing to the best of my ability in this work, and if everybody says 'omg so cool' all the time, I'm not gonna know not to be overdescriptive and such for my next work. (Though, I'm too far into this one to change the style.)

    Thank you. :D (lol, fame'd)

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    [quote="The Dan"]
    Quote Originally Posted by Strata

    It's thirty pages? Eesh.

    Thats with sive 8 font =)
    Its 58 with size 12.


    im on page 16/30
    I need some friends on Kradia.
    Add me please, make me feel special.
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    WOW now im further in its awsome
    DAE314 SAID THIS

    BYE DSH ILY <3 *kissy kissy*

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    Please Update.
    I need some friends on Kradia.
    Add me please, make me feel special.
    EighthWonder - 10 Warrior. [Lol]

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    Quote Originally Posted by AnimaVilis
    Please Update.
    Well, it takes a long time to write. And I have more than one life outside FanFiction. D:

    I'll post here every time there's a new chapter up. Expect about one every two-three weeks or so.

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