Skill over style. Nice words, though any mistake in there was obviously not deliberate.
I like the back of the shirt black. I made quite a lot of changes to the armor, you just have to spot them. The belt looks high because it was only added afterwards =( The belt is just one of the additions. The legs are long because I didn't put an end to it =P
But in short its ok. I appreciate the advise, when it comes to drawing, another person can see the flaws easily, whereas it takes time for the artist himself to find the mistakes.