well the first one focus on drawing the weapon. it is but a sword, so I focus on the design of the handle. The 2nd one focus on the design for the clothes... XP
1st one: The design looks rather good, but I think you made a bad mistake of cutting out part of the sword, since it's for weapon designs. Besides that, the way the girl is holding her weapon is very odd.
2nd one: It looks rather like another MS weapon I've seen before, but even so, it doesn't seem too original. I like the shading though.
well the first one focus on drawing the weapon. it is but a sword, so I focus on the design of the handle. The 2nd one focus on the design for the clothes... XP
Well, I suggest that you make the sword in the first one larger then if the focus is the handle because it's very hard to make out the details.
Oh, well I resized the pic...the original one is A4 size...don't think I won anyways...
impressive drawings... the eyes are slightly out of place...
the body form=skinny?
overall 6/10
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When drawing a sword, focus more on different views from different POVs rather than people wielding them, also keep in mind that MS weapons are quite a bit out there. :P
I mean look around at other MS weapons to get insipiration. I'm actually thinking a high level Katar would be a good idea, but it would need to be sexy.
Nice artwork Cookies ^_^
Although I do have to agree that the left eye is kinda small, its still a great drawing overall!
The weapon designs are nice as well but I would like to see the 1st pic a little larger so I can get a better look at that sword:D
Thanks for the comments people~ I'll take note of them...Here's my drawing L from my comic book... XP
Hahaha..I like L so much...I think he's HOT~!!! XD
WOW, that L drawing is pretty much perfect.
as for the others, i'd say you've got the drawing part down good but your anatomy (bodily structure) is kinda wack
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