I think its great. Although I think what azn said was a little harsh,I agree to him to one degree: you need a few more images to really get the feel for the battles.
Apart from that, the storyline is good and your grammar isnt bad :D
neigh
The 7th part is now published. Feel free to check it!
Continue with the good work!
噢如果超人会飞
那就让我在空中停一停歇
再次俯瞰这个世界
会让我觉得好一些
哦拯救地球好累
虽然有些疲惫但我还是会
不要问我哭过了没
因为超人不能有眼泪