The Journey Comics

**c_o_o_l38** · 2nd June 2007, 12:19 AM

xD Here's my comics called The Journey

STORYLINE SO FAR: Ok Nick was training to become a warrior when he was thinking what would happen if he DOES become a warrior ok. Nicks mom had disapeared with not a trace his dad was shot along time ago by shadow warriors and Nick had only 1 person named Seth who was his best freind. Well then Nick hears Seth scream for help. Nick darts straight for where the scream is coming from when he sees a shadow warrior with a rifle. The shadow warrior tells Nick not to move and then says that that's one move your freind will never make again Nick looks and his freind is dead dangling from a light post Nick falls on the ground and crys.

NOTE: Tell me you char code if you want to be in my comics.

**BPheonix** · 2nd June 2007, 01:52 AM

good try, no plot though, don't really get the script O.o, and fix the bubble. first one that talks is up.

and blue in the foreground of brownish wood is bad to the eyes.

**Blazingwind1** · 2nd June 2007, 02:10 AM

lol pretty good. but yeah u need a clearer plot. and its a tad gruesome. the person with his head impaled on that stick is pretty gory lol. but anyways nice job :D