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[Tangknight96]

Run for his life

[coolcoolfish]

ahh 2 is close enough he's gonna run for his life

Chapter2:The chase

"oh snaps!!" exclaimed kraz, he swept himself onto his feet grabbed the hilt of his sword and took off in a dead sprint. He took one huge leap landed on one snail's head crushing it in the process and pushing off launching over the others."hah! stupid snail can't touch this!" yelled kraz at the snails as he started dancing like M.C.hammer when suddenly WHAM he flew back and took 3 damage, he then noticed the snails, slowly but surely, were following him "nuuu!!" Kraz had nowhere ellse to run because he had jumped the wrong way and was now cornered by a cliff."Oh god what am i supposed to do now, well i might as well take it like a man" said kraz as he braced himself for the next hit, but it never came instead he opened his eyes to a battlefeild of dead snails and glowing arrows "wtf!?!?!" just as he said that a middle sized man roughly 5'6 landed in front of him on one knee in his right hand he held a bow glowing brightly with power "hello there" the man said his bow returning to normal "who are you?"
"my name is RedDevision but you can call me red"explained the man
~~~Question time~~~
should kraz...
A: invite the man who saved his life
B: ignore the man and work on getting his revenge on Mary
C: conclude that the man is a rapist and run away from him
D: use this random potion he found on the ground
~~~Your Decide!~~~

[LT gamer]

Much better.

I choose C.

[coolcoolfish]

cmon need more votes

[i_am_buzzerd]

i choose A

[XxKiraYamatoxX]

I choose C.

Edit: Punctuating, spellchecking and paragraphing make it easier to read.

[Gloomy]

Choise C FTW.

[coolcoolfish]

ok choice c he thinks the dude's a rapist

~~Chapter 2 part B~~
"OMG! he killed all those snails to get to me so he can rape meezz!!" shouted kraz pushing down read and stepping on his face while running away"What the hell man!" shouted Red.Angered by Kraz's stupid outburst of fear and panic Red loaded an arrowinto his bow,knelt down, pulled back, aimed, and let it go it flew fast and straight, right into kraz's leg. Of course being such a high level this immediatly killed him.

"Oh my god im dead!now he's gonna rape my ghost!"
"dude stop screaming im not gonna rape you, what can i do to prove that point?"
Kraz suddenly stopped his manic screaming and thought for a second "Well...you could kill Mary for me..."
"Done" and with that being said he filled his bow with that blinding glow again and shot an arrow straight at the back of mary's unknowing head still on the cliff above."gotcha b!tch!" exclaimed Red excitedly but his hopes were dashed because at the very moment...Mary had caught his arrow...with her bare hand
~~~Question time~~~
should Mary...
A: break the arrow and go flamingo style on their asses
B: drop the arrow and go about her own buisness
C: throw the arrow back at them full force
D: throw the noobs that spawn in front of her at them
~~~You Decide!~~~

[XxKiraYamatoxX]

Oooo, I vote for D.

[~UnknownBandit~]

"gotcha b!tch!"

I lold profoundly at this.

A: break the arrow and go flamingo style on their asses
B: drop the arrow and go about her own buisness
C: throw the arrow back at them full force
D: throw the noobs that spawn in front of her at them
~~~You Decide!~~~

I choose D. @_@