interactive story

[coolcoolfish]

well i'm bored and everyone tells me i'm destined to be a writer so here i'll make one that's fun for everyone an interactive story=D kk here it goes
P.S.i jsut made this up on the spot
EDIT: on each of the choices the first choice that gets up to 3 votes will be what i write next
DISCLAIMER: please keep in mind i'm making this story to have fun i'm not here to impress you with my mad writing skillz i'm here to make you laugh and to lighten all of your horrible lives with humor so please bear with the story and vote by the choices I give,thank you and keep all limbs inside the vehichle at all times


CHAPTER ONE:the begginings(ftw)
*whoosh!*plop*
kraz:shat! my head!
(kraz rubs his head and looks around him)
kraz:well at least i'm in the game while im here let's go exploring...hey wait a second why am i on this cliff?and who is this?Mary?
kraz:why hello Mary
Mary:...
kraz:ummm... helooooo
Mary:...
kraz:what the hell you noob are you emo or something?
(just then kraz noticed the sign floating above her head reading "double click"
kraz: ohhhh
(kraz proceeds to double click on Mary)
Mary:hello and welcome to the fabulous world of Maplestory!
kraz: oh noowwww you talk
Mary: would you like to take the tutorial or proceed straight into your adventure?
kraz:hmmmm
~~~question time~~~
Should kraz...
A:take the tutorial
B: proceed on his quest
C:slap Mary in the face for being so emo
~~~You decide!~~~

[LT gamer]

If your destined to be a writer, then actually make it a legible writing... o_o
That my friend is a script. What you want is stuff like paragraphs, including figurative language, complex words, etc.


Otherwise ermm....

Kraz should do C :)

[coolcoolfish]

dude gimme a break im 14 for god's sake it's jsut supposed to be a fun story
and how isn't that legible even if i mispell a word i think everyone knows what i was really trying to say
EDIT:also im gonna start from maple island and then move on to the other things

[~UnknownBandit~]

C! I choose C, slap that bish!

[LT gamer]

dude gimme a break im 14 for god's sake it's jsut supposed to be a fun story
and how isn't that legible even if i mispell a word i think everyone knows what i was really trying to say
EDIT:also im gonna start from maple island and then move on to the other things

I'm 15 o_o. I guess its because I type like this so much it seems so natural...

Btw, seriously about paragraph part... DO IT. Script=/=story :(

[XxKiraYamatoxX]

Punctuation and everything helps. This looks like a script.

*Votes for C*

[coolcoolfish]

ok the people vote c: slap Mary in the face for being an emo bish sooo

~Chapter one part 2~
"im not taking any stupid tutorial iv'e decided to strike you for not answering me in the first place!" Kraz then brought his hand from down at his side around his pocket swiftly into Mary's flabby cheek.Mary acted as if a fly had landed on her face "Sir please control yourself" persuaded Mary,but Kraz was in no mood he proceeded to bring his arm around a second time with much more force leaving an imprint of the back of his hand on Mary's fat face. "Sir calm down or i will use force against you" persisted Mary,"QUIET BISH!" shouted Kraz as he brought his hand around a final time turing his hips shoulders and entire body into this slap his hand was coming around faster than a bullet train aimed perfectly for mary's right cheek when suddenly Mary's hand shot up and grabbed his wrist. Kraz's expression went from angerly determined into utter awe and shock.
"I warned you sir" said Mary quickly twisting kraz's arm over her shoulder bringing him oveer her head and off the side of the cliff "Have a good day!" she shouted at him watching him fall to his sure death. a few hours later Kraz awoke in a very brightly light feild. He was still in a daze but he could vaugly make out the shape of his rusted long sword sticking out of the ground beside him. when his vision cleared he saw his worst nightmare surrounding him were 15 or 16...green...snails
~~~Question time!~~~
should kraz....
A: pick up his swoord and fight with all his honor
B: leave his sword and run like hell screaming like a little girl
C: call for help on his iphone
~~~You decide!~~~

[zigkid3]

Btw, seriously about paragraph part... DO IT. Script=/=story :(

you can do it in script form. Tennessee Williams does it.
plays are in scripts, so it's fine. also some books are in the form of scripts.

[coolcoolfish]

cmon need more votes

[i_am_buzzerd]

i choose A