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    Jr. Necki gutterball930's Avatar
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    Chap 4 up Still not done I need someone to be the unknown guy




    what kon thinks when looking at RE
    Kon. says:
    there is leon shaving uuuh saving her
    http://timbucktoe.myminicity.com/
    please help me grow
    http://timbucktoe.myminicity.com/ind

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    I suggest you read a few novels to get a basic grasp of punctuation and paragraphing first. You need to spellcheck your work too......
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    Darn it Kira when will you be happy XD
    well I should tell it now I have only ever lived 5 years in England so I never realy got far in spelling darn second grade




    what kon thinks when looking at RE
    Kon. says:
    there is leon shaving uuuh saving her
    http://timbucktoe.myminicity.com/
    please help me grow
    http://timbucktoe.myminicity.com/ind

    Spoiler!

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    Chap 4 updsfsdfsdf




    what kon thinks when looking at RE
    Kon. says:
    there is leon shaving uuuh saving her
    http://timbucktoe.myminicity.com/
    please help me grow
    http://timbucktoe.myminicity.com/ind

    Spoiler!

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    Took away all spelling mistakes (i hope XD) and edited the story with help from Kon thanks buddy




    what kon thinks when looking at RE
    Kon. says:
    there is leon shaving uuuh saving her
    http://timbucktoe.myminicity.com/
    please help me grow
    http://timbucktoe.myminicity.com/ind

    Spoiler!

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    CHAP 5 Done




    what kon thinks when looking at RE
    Kon. says:
    there is leon shaving uuuh saving her
    http://timbucktoe.myminicity.com/
    please help me grow
    http://timbucktoe.myminicity.com/ind

    Spoiler!

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    Pwitty Hawt lol

    Keep it up lak

    Look it is my bad CRAMMAR again lol

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