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Thread: My Maple Life (based on my true Maple experience)

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    Jr. Necki DarkRanger's Avatar
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    Oookay. Thanks. I need to write, write, write (type, actually >.<).
    Doing Chapter Four now?
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    Goals:
    (•) Get to 999.
    ( ) Get to 1.
    ( ) Get to 2.
    ( ) Get to 3. :D

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    Ya, prepare yourself for horribly written dialogue. :3

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    My dialogue sucks too. No matter how you do it, it seems so repetitive.

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    Chapter 4 is officially out, now with dialogue! :p I hope you like it.

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    Pretty good, the dialogue is like mine :p but I think it's pretty good.

    Oh I got my 3rd chapter up when you get a chance

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    I'm trying to use less "...." said .... as possible.

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    Use... 'I shouted' or... 'I commented' or 'I repeated' or etc.
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    Goals:
    (•) Get to 999.
    ( ) Get to 1.
    ( ) Get to 2.
    ( ) Get to 3. :D

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