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For A New Day To Dream
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    Sword For A New Day To Dream

    Prologue
    The skies were clear and the temperature was pleasant, the little city of Southperry remebered that young boy of all his training till that day, there were some people that said he wouldnt do it, but he persevered, and, at that day, he was ready for departure, the razor in his hand was the proof that he was ready, it was a hard task to get it from Bigg, and his headband, obtained from Maria, was a real helpfull item, and there was the Set-Up chair that Pio gave him in exchange for some materials...Good times he spent, but now was the time to get ready for a new adventure, his friend, Elzain, had already gone to Lith Harbor, and since the last letter he received, he was already a magician, and said he was missing him. Elzain was a good friend, but Neroh didn't felt ready to go with him at that time, but now he was ready, and another friend of both was going with him, his name was Sammy, and he intended to take the dark job, to be the rogue...Neroh wanted to become a Swordman, with Strength and Power.
    Late at that day, when both Neroh and Sammy were on the ship that would take them to Lith Harbor, they saw something weird, a guy that took the ship with them came running from the front of the ship, none of them understood, until the guy explains he was afraid of water, they started a dialoge, and the guy said his name was Galahad, the trip was funny, with those tree talking about wha they wanted to be and why, and Galahad wanted to be a Wizard. Neroh noticed he was a bit weaker then he and Sammy, but wisahed him good luck when he left and left the ship, then he saw the beautifull city of Lith Harbor. The ships, the ocean, the buildings that looked like beach buildings...It was awesome, and it was calling them to start a new adventure, at that time, the sun was setting.
    Chapter I: The Path of Thief.
    Meeting the Dark Lord.
    Waking up early at morning was not exactly cool, but that was something they would have to do if they had intention of getting to Kerning City, then to Perion, and then to Ellinia to meet Elzain. It was still dark when they went down to the Main Street of Lith Harbor, there were a lot of people around a strange vicking-like guy, he wasdeclaiming a poem about the Jobs a begginer could take, and both Neroh and Sammy got interested, then he asked a few questions and they correctly answered, hen the guy started distributing indications for everybody who wanted, with a different indication for each job, Neroh and Sammy took it and decided that they should go to the cityes they wanted, then, they went to Phil to get a taxi to Kerning city.
    "The city Stinks" was the first thing that came to Neroh´s head, but Sammy was so glad for finally being at Kerning that Neroh decided to say nothing, the decaying buildings the dirty streets seemed to amaze Sammy, the ruins of what should have being a big and flourishing town was simply getting him agape, Sammy looked with eagle's eye to every single detail of the town and loved it, the crushed walls and a strange stench that came from a place not that far from the place they were, the Pharmacy upon them, every single thing seemed to give Sammy a new reasong to become a thief, they crossed through a bar that, Sammy said, would be a great place for a Breakfast later, and went throug several buildings till a sewer exit (that one really stinked) where they saw several people reunited around girl named Lakelis, that explained them that a big monster appeared around and that she was going to select four brave heroes to slay it, they offered temselves but she said that they were too weak, so they went out of there and entered a shop where two guys was selling stuff, one of them, Mapa, was selling Armors, and the other one, Mainstein, was selling weapons. Sammy memorized the way to get there after becoming a Rogue, the only problem was: Where were the Dark Lord?As they didn't knew and there was starting to dawn, they decided to go to the bar to have a breakfast...
    "Abandon All Hope, Ye Who Enter Here"






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    Wow, that's really good.. I can't think of anything that's wrong with it, except it could be a little longer.

    I dream of a day when chickens can cross a road without their motives being questioned.

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