1) For your Hermit build you need 5 avenger to get 1 FJ obviously your not a level 100 Hermit if you were you would realize this.
2)You should also add the option of having 3 into mastery the Critical Throw maxed. Although i realize that you may not like this build but some people perfer this method and you should leave the reader able to choose between the two builds.
3)Why not max Nilble Body?
4)Add perfered and suggested training spots for people who want to know a place to train.
5)Other than that this is basicly a basic outline of the skills and your builds.