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[Xorten]

lol thanks for including my fanfic title -_-

Now come on, that criticism wasn't even the least bit harsh, you don't need to go sulk.

I was just saying that you're title is a sentence, it should just be;
'Artemis Fowl in MapleStory' or whatever, instead of giving it its own little prologue.

Just keep it short and sweet.