Maple Tribes (16+)

[gutterball930]

I don't own Tokyo tribes or Nexon Bla bla bla Yada yada yada

Prologe

There were 4 clans. One in each city

Elinia: the Saru
100 members
Leader: unknown

Kerning: the Kibauto
200 Members
Leader:Mero

Perion: the Saru Motsibeko
100 Members
Leader Tera

Henesys: The Hands
50 Members
Leader: Iwao

After the clan war 3 years ago everone kept to there turf. But all changed after a girl got involved

Chap 1

"Yo this is my new Kid" Kai says
"RAWWWWWRRRRRRR" the kid says and bites the head off of the leader

TRINGGGGG TRINGGGG
"Yo"Kai said
"Hey man where are you we are all hanging out" Kim said
"Do you know how Fcking late it is" Kai said
"You need to come here right now" Kim said
"Oh and I heard there's a new Cd out"
"Yo"
Bleep

"What a fcked up dream" Kai muttered
Kai looked in the mirror 1.90m very muscular and well lets put it this way coloured.
“Well best be going”
Stepping in his Spijker (Black) he drove off to his favourite café on the way he was being followed by the Inoway gang
“PULL OVER” the guy shouted
“Relax G, I’m pulling over ” Kai said calm
Pulling over the guy came to the window of the Spijker
“You Saru???”
“Yeah”
“Pass over yo' money”

Then Kai sped away hitting the guy in front of him off of his motor
Following him was the guy who asked for money
Kai pulled out an Aluminium baseball bat from under his seat
and stuck it between the front tyre of the guy following him

Arriving at the Café Kim came up to him
“Those darn Inoway gang, would have been here quicker” Kai said
“Took Inkoashira street again??” Kim asked
“Hell no I took Itsukaichi street, but them motherfckers were there too”
“Here catch” Kai said tossing a Porn magazine to Kim
“Thanks, you coming with me to Kerning”
“Nope”
“Well don’t say anything to Tera” and tossed the Porn magazine back
“Won’t do”
“Later”

Running up to Kai was Hasheem
"Hey is Kim gone yet???"
"Yeah he just left"
"Goddammit he said that I could go with him"
Looking in the magazine Kai saw a photo was underlined
"Looks like he found his poison" Kai smiled

*Not the end

[Timmias]

Do I sense a new fic?

[gutterball930]

Yeah you do

[Timmias]

Im so smart, never would have guessed without your reassurance

[Starlit Azure]

I was going to give you the same rehashed crap as with every fanfic like this, but i found a way to put it in one sentence.

http://hidden-street.net/forum/showthread.php?t=27653

[gutterball930]

Well gee lets see your on the list i'm not so STFU

[Timmias]

random magazines

[gasy222]

Like Azure said And DO FCKING(As you say)PUNCUACTION DAMMIT

[gutterball930]

Look you fcking suck here so STFU
stop dissing someone who at least trys his best every time goddammit

[NegiWarrior]

http://hidden-street.net/forum/showthread.php?t=27653

Well gee lets see your on the list i'm not so STFU

The sheer stupidity of this made me Lol so hard in real life.
Kudos to 'a' idiot!


Also, here's some advice on building your fanfic.

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(thought I would do it so Ivan doesn't need to)