Sounds great, but you miss a lot of capital letters =) Other than that, the plot is really interesting! I hope you keep on writing soon.
Name: Seela
Job: Fighter
Age: 15
Description: A young looking girl with bright green eyes and long dark hair. She's wearing a Chief Stan Hat, Blue Oriental Top and Skirt, Blue Jangoon shoes, Dark Knuckles and she's fighting with a Zard. She's got a strong personality, meaning she knows what she wants. Her dream is to live as a Nomad.
Special Skills: Her rage makes even stronger, but more vulnerable than usual.
Known or not known by the masses: Not known