Destiny [Revised Version]

[RavenBlade]

Bump. There have been revisions, but they were ages ago, and i was thinking of a full revision but... Sigh.

[RavenBlade]

Updated.

Spoiler of Chapter Nine: Can you let go?

Spoiler!

Misa talks to her daughter about Raven. Music that inspired the chapter: Final Fantasy 7 Advent Children's 'Sign'.

[RavenBlade]

Er. Okay, i know i haven't been updating for a while, but i promise you sincerely that i am now doing my best- fine, putting some effort into revamping it, and make it sound less plain. I have major ideas, but i need some things. Who wants to make a cameo?

[RavenBlade]

First Chapter revamp, completed.

[Lunasaku]

I didn't think it could get better. But it did.

[RavenBlade]

You're very sweet.
Now i can't revamp the next 8 eight chapters, however.
Im going to add chapters IN BETWEEN the already 'done' chapters.

[RavenBlade]

Actually, that's prologue part two.
BLARG. Still working on it, but i did some edits to the Prologue part one, AGAIN, since i didn't like Raven whimpering on the floor so much.

Until i post again, don't read beyond Prologue Part One.
A lot of fixing ta' do.

[RavenBlade]

Continued to further edit Prologue, part I with Microsoft Word - nothing really.
Get two replies and i'll work on the next chapters sooner. :p

[RavenBlade]

Bump!
Prologue, Part II is complete!

Now here comes the question:
What will be Luna's new name?
Koneko?
Wut?
It all depends.
But you see, a surname would do too. Imagine i DID pick Koneko,
but that technically is literally:
Kitten/Cat Platz. LOL

But no.

Seriously.
No.


So if i get a nice name, with good meaning, i'll take it!
Remember to give translation.
It doesn't necessarily have to be Japanese either.



P.S.
Who wants me to change Raven's name into Karasu?

[Lunasaku]

Let's see the options...

Luna-Raven
Koneko-Raven
Luna-Karasu
Koneko-Karasu

Suggestions:

Ayame: 'Iris'. I think it's also associated with the moon somehow, (I read it somewhere) so it would be a good replacement for Luna because Luna = moon.

Haru- if Luna was born in the spring (Haru = Spring)
Harumi: 'Spring Beauty'.
Haruna: 'Springtime vegetables'.
Haruki: 'Spring Tree'.

Tsukiko: Again, associated with the moon. It means 'moon child'.

Suki: 'Beloved'.

Kotone: 'Harp Sound'.

Surnames:

Suzuki: 'Bell Tree'.

Yoshida: 'Lucky Rice Paddy'.

Asano: 'Shallow Plain'.

If you wanna browse 'em, go here: http://genealogy.familyeducation.com...rigin/japanese

There are first names there too, as well as their meanings.