Okay...I see. Thanks for reading.

I'm from Singapore too. And I know how much ink costs. Hence my surprise.

Well, 8.5. That's a pretty high score, for something long and draggy like that. Anything I can edit at this point? I'm entering it for a competition, that's why.

I have yet to receive your review, RavenBlade. But no pressure.

Wow, this is longer a thread than I expected it to be...