Her feedback on my essay. This is it, none on the second page.
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This was the prompt that I chose (I HAVE NO CLUE WHY I CHOSE THIS PROMPT MY FRIENDS SAY THAT IT WAS THE HARDEST)
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I hate required page lengths. So glad my English 102 instructor didn't believe in page lengths. My essays were on average 2 to 3 pages and I got good grades because the teacher liked how quick I was to get to the point.
Butts.
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Her feedback on my essay. This is it, none on the second page.
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This was the prompt that I chose (I HAVE NO CLUE WHY I CHOSE THIS PROMPT MY FRIENDS SAY THAT IT WAS THE HARDEST)
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by Cryopon
You never tied it back to the eyes O.o
oh god
Don't tell me you chose "the eyes" for the reason I'm thinking....
Last edited by Tesiqurasa; 26th April 2011 at 07:11 AM.
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Idk
I'd have to see the grading rubric and sit through your class. Maybe your teacher wants you to redo it? I'd go see her asap (like...tomorrow morning if necessary)
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So you know for certain that ---/100 is a 0?
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I skimmed over it and it looked like you just summarized the story.
And the essay itself is super short.
Not enough commentary.
Also try to state which pages your quotes come from.